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Band 6+: Should parents always help Their children with everything

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I totally agree with this because parents should let their kids explore the world and try new things that they cannot do or have not tried before. They can learn from their mistakes, which will build their skills to continue in the world. For example, if they want to go to a place that is unfamiliar to them, their parents should allow them to go and not provide any help. They should learn how to resolve problems on their own.

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I totally agree with this because the parent should let the kids, their kids to explore the world and try new thing that they cannot do, they cannot try before because they can learn from the mistake and it will build their skill to continue in the world for example, if they want to go to other place that they are unfamiliar with the children, their parent should allow them to go and do not provide any help for their children, they should learn it by themselves and how to resolve the problem by in their own

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 5

they: 4

should: 3

parents: 2

world: 2

learn: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, it focuses heavily on one aspect of the question, neglecting the other side of the argument. Consider exploring both sides of the issue to provide a more balanced and comprehensive response. Developing the example would also strengthen the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition and slightly unnatural phrasing ("the parent should let the kids, their kids"), but the overall message is clear. Improving sentence structure and reducing repetition would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate, but some words are not used with complete precision. The phrasing 'try new thing that they cannot do, they cannot try before' is slightly awkward. More precise and sophisticated vocabulary would improve the score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors in sentence structure and word order. For example, 'how to resolve the problem by in their own' is grammatically incorrect. Focusing on accurate sentence construction and avoiding run-on sentences would improve the score.

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