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Band 6+: Should parents always help Their children with everything

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No, I don't think so. Parents should assist their children in doing something, but always allow their children to do things independently. When they grow up, if they are always seeking help from their parents, that may lead to a dependent future. In this modern world, everyone is independent; everyone is an independent person.

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No, I don’t think so. Parents should assist their children for doing something, but always allow their children to do them independently. Because when they grew up, they always seeking the help of parents for doing something, that may lead to a dependent future. So, in this modern world, everyone is independent, everyone is independent people. .

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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parents: 2

children: 2

always: 2

everyone: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is acceptable, but it could be improved by providing more specific examples and elaborating on the potential consequences of over-reliance on parental help. Consider exploring the nuances of appropriate support versus enabling dependency more thoroughly.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition ("everyone is independent"), and a slight stumble at the end. Improving the flow by removing the repetition and adding a stronger concluding sentence would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "assist" and "independently" are used appropriately. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the ideas more precisely. For example, instead of 'dependent future', consider 'a life of dependence' or 'an inability to function independently'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors. The sentence "Because when they grew up..." is grammatically incorrect. The use of the present continuous ("is seeking") is also slightly awkward in the context. More complex grammatical structures could be used to improve the overall score. For example, using a conditional sentence to express the consequence of parental over-assistance would be beneficial.

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