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Band 7+: Should we rely heavely on our family or is it better to try to be independent

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Personally, I believe that the person who mostly relies on themselves is better. I understand that when we are young, we might rely heavily on our family because, of course, we don't have any financial support or cannot earn our own money. But as we get older, it's better not to stay dependent on our family. I also believe that parents should support their children in becoming independent, finding financial stability, or discovering their own career paths to build their own fundamental processes.

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Personally, I believe that the person who mostly rely on stuff is better. And I can understand that when we were young, we might be relying heavily on our own family because of course we don’t have any financial support or we cannot earn our own money when we were young. But when we get older, it’s better not to stay under our own family. I also believe that parents should support their own children to become independent, to find some financial or to find their own career path to build their own fundamental process.

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their: 3

believe: 2

better: 2

family: 2

financial: 2

support: 2

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Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. While the words used are appropriate, expanding your range of vocabulary related to independence and family reliance would enhance your response. For instance, instead of 'financial support,' you could use 'economic self-sufficiency' or 'fiscal autonomy.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors (e.g., 'the person who mostly rely on stuff is better,' 'stay under our own family'). Correcting these errors and using a wider range of grammatical structures would improve your score. For example, try using more complex sentence structures such as conditional sentences or relative clauses.

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