Band 4+: Some people say it would be better for society if everyone got the same salary. What do you think about that? Why?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer directly addresses the topic and clearly states a position, which is good. However, it lacks depth and development. The response is relatively short and does not fully explore the implications of equal salaries for society. It mentions a key point about motivation but does not provide specific examples or personal experience to support the argument. To improve, consider elaborating on the consequences for different professions, discussing potential benefits or drawbacks for society as a whole, and including a concrete example or personal observation to strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is coherent and addresses the topic directly, but it lacks clear organization and cohesive devices. The ideas are presented in a somewhat repetitive manner (e.g., 'as a result' is used three times). To improve, structure the response with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, and use a wider range of linking words (e.g., 'furthermore', 'moreover', 'consequently').

The vocabulary is adequate but limited. Words like 'harmful' and 'disappear' are used imprecisely (e.g., 'disappear the demand' should be 'lose the demand'). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'demotivate', 'undermine', 'incentive', 'equitable').

The grammar is mostly accurate but simple. There are some errors, such as 'the professions will lose' (should be 'would lose' for conditional) and 'they disappear the demand' (incorrect verb usage). To improve, use a wider range of structures, including conditionals and complex sentences, and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms.