Band 6+: teacher check the project and give feedback

To your information as I promised. So the first standardized testing. So here you mentioned advantage. You mentioned two advantages. However, there are only one. Many university and employers use standardized scores. Why? Because it’s very helpful for, let’s say, educators or hiring managers in order to identify the gaps. So could you get? So here you mentioned only one advantage. You need to add one more. At this advantage, okay. However, I expected more detailed and more wide information from you. And Fidon as well. Hands-on learning. Hand-on learning, okay. You can actually keep that. However, it would be better to refine it with examples, like with samples in terms of what? In which schools? Universities. Hands-on learning use and what kind of consequences and outcomes they get. So try to write this information as well. Cons often need special equipment. And then again, explain why, like, you think that that’s kind of cons. Special equipment. So it means that no school or university equipped with those special devices or, let’s say, gadgets or appliances. For that reason, you mentioned this. So try to support your idea. And always imagine someone who doesn’t have any prior knowledge is going to listen to you. So always give the information with that way. So, and then universities with hands-on learning. Okay, you mentioned the university names. That’s very nice. Add pictures, visuals, at least to be coherent and descriptive of why you mentioned at least Rose Hulman. What’s that? Rose Hulman, let’s say university. And we’ll…