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Band 6+: To be famous, do you think a person needs to have some special talent

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Not really, in my opinion, everyone can be famous with hard work. For example, IShowSpeed, a famous YouTube content creator, became famous because of his active emotions and his admiration for his idol, Cristiano. Maybe he became famous because he worked hard at it. To become famous, you have to understand the algorithm.

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Not really, in my opinion everyone can be famous with this working on it. For example, I show speed, a famous YouTube content creator just became famous because of his active emotions and just favor to his idol, Christian. Maybe he became famous because he worked hard on it. And in order to become famous, you have to know the algorithm.

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became: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides an example. However, it focuses more on the strategies for gaining fame rather than the necessity of talent. Consider exploring the multifaceted nature of fame and the varying roles talent plays in different fields. Broadening the scope of the discussion would strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There's a slight stumble in the first sentence, and the phrasing could be more concise. Minor repetition doesn't detract significantly from the overall fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The use of 'algorithm' shows a good range, but more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could elevate the response. The example of IShowSpeed is relevant and well-explained.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence 'I show speed...' is grammatically incorrect. While the meaning is clear, more precise grammatical structures would improve the score. The use of simple and complex sentences is present, but a wider range would be beneficial.

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