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Band 7+: What are some of the most important decisions young people have to make?

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Well, I think the most important decision young people have to make is deciding which career path they are going to pursue for their future. When students are at the age of university or maybe senior high school, they struggle with their academic work and are not really sure which kind of career they are going into. So, I do think it's really important for teachers or parents to give them some advice and help them make the right decisions.

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Well, I think the most important decision young people have to make is they have to decide which career and which aspect they are going to do for their future career. Because when students are at the age of university or maybe senior high schools, people are struggle into their academic work and they are not really sure that which kind of career they are going through. So I do think it’s really important if people like teachers or parents give them some advice and let them do the right decisions.

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think: 2

important: 2

which: 2

career: 2

going: 2

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Task Response

The response is relevant to the question and provides a valid point about career choices. However, it focuses heavily on a specific group (young people) and a narrow aspect of life decisions. To improve, consider broadening the scope to include decisions across different life stages and areas, such as relationships, education beyond career choices, or significant life changes.

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