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Band 4+: What are some of the potential drawbacks of globalization, and how can these be mitigated?

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There are many disadvantages to globalization. It can have negative effects, especially in the future. For example, it can lead to bad situations where many people face issues like reduced sustainability. There will be increased pollution, and health problems such as cancer may become more prevalent. Carbon dioxide will be released everywhere, and many people will be exposed to it. These are serious concerns that need to be addressed.

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There are so many disadvantages for globalization. It can have bad effects, especially after so many years in the future. Like it will have bad situation and so many people like population less sustainability people like have smell like bad Oxygen so many dangerous Because algerus will be happening, cancer will be everywhere, CO2 will, carbon dioxide will be separate everywhere, like so many people will breathe carbon dioxide before I’ll add.

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