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Band 6+: What are the potential societal consequences of increased automation in various industries?

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The consequences of increased automation on the job market are pretty visible. The first thing we can notice is that some jobs will have fewer openings. Also, because of the automation of jobs, some salaries of workers will decrease, and the prices of projects will also decrease. The social structures may change a little because we can not only lose jobs but also gain others.

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The consequences of increased automation of the job markets are pretty visible. The first thing that we can notice is that some jobs will have less places. Also, because of the automation of the jobs, some salaries of the workers will decrease and also the prices of the projects will decrease. the social structures may change a little because we can not only lose working places but we can also gain another.

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will: 3

also: 3

automation: 2

because: 2

decrease: 2

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Task Response

The answer addresses the question by discussing the impact of automation on job availability, salaries, project costs, and social structures. To improve, consider providing more specific examples or elaborating on the potential new jobs that could emerge due to automation. Additionally, exploring the broader societal implications beyond job changes could enhance the response.

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The response is generally coherent, but there are some pauses and hesitations that affect the flow. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in addition') could improve the structure. Try to elaborate more on each point to enhance coherence.

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Using more specific and varied vocabulary related to automation and its impact would improve the score. For example, instead of 'less places,' use 'fewer opportunities' or 'reduced availability.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors (e.g., 'less places'). Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in basic sentence constructions. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles.

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