Band 6+: What are the various places where we see advertisements?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response adequately addresses the question by listing various places where advertisements are found. To improve, consider providing more diverse examples and elaborating on the impact or pervasiveness of advertising in different contexts. A more detailed explanation of the convenience of phone ads would also strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition of 'advertisements' could be improved by using synonyms or rephrasing. A slightly more sophisticated introduction and conclusion would enhance the fluency.

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Using 'platforms' instead of 'things' shows a better command of vocabulary. More specific examples of advertising locations would improve the lexical resource score.

Grammar is mostly accurate with minor errors ('in phone' should be 'on phones'). The sentence structure is simple but effective. Using more complex sentence structures would improve the score.