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Band 5+: What do you plan to do after finishing your studies?

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When I finish my education at this school, I want to travel around the world. I've planned to go back to live in Poland. Now I'm living in Baku, and when I finish my exams, I want to go back to live in Korea. I'm going to study English, and it will be easy for me to come back to Korea. I've planned to go back to live in Korea. I'm going to study English, and it will be easy for me to come back to Korea. In short, I just want to live and build my family in Poland. That's my answer to this question.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

When I’m finished in my education in this school, I want to travel around the world. I’ve planned to get back to love back in Poland. Now I’m living in Baku and when I’m getting my exams, I want to get back to love back in Korea. I’m going to study English and it will be easy for me to come back to Korea. I’ve planned to get back to love back in Korea. I’m going to study English and it will be easy for me to come back to Korea. In short, I just want to live and build my family and my family in Poland. That’s my answer for this question.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Vocabulary Repetition:

back: 5

live: 4

korea: 4

want: 3

finish: 2

planned: 2

poland: 2

going: 2

study: 2

english: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

3.5

Your pronunciation needs significant improvement as it may hinder comprehension. Devote time to individual sounds and their combinations.

Task Response

The response is understandable but lacks focus and coherence. While it mentions several post-study plans (travel, returning to Poland and Korea, studying English), these are not well-integrated and some are repeated. Developing a clearer and more concise plan with specific details would improve the response. Consider focusing on one or two key goals and elaborating on them with relevant details and personal experiences. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there's a noticeable lack of coherence. The student repeats the same information about returning to Korea and studying English. The connection between traveling the world, returning to Poland, and returning to Korea is unclear. Improving the logical flow and reducing repetition would significantly enhance fluency and coherence. Consider using transition words to connect ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The repeated use of "go back to live" is somewhat repetitive. More varied and precise vocabulary would improve the score. Consider using synonyms for "go back" and more descriptive language to describe the plans. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly correct, but there are some minor errors and inconsistencies. For example, the phrase "get back to love" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The student also repeats the same sentence structure multiple times. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence variety would improve the score. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring correct tense usage.

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