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Band 7+: what do young people often want to replace ?

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From my own observation, young people today are very fashion conscious. So I would say they frequently want to update their wardrobes. This is due to many reasons. First, there's peer pressure, as they want to buy trendy items and not be left out or stand out from the crowd. Moreover, the great impact of celebrities on social media influences many young people to imitate their styles.

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From my own observation, as youngsters nowadays are really fashion conscious. So I would say that they frequently want to update their wardops. Uh, due to many reasons. The first one is because like, you know, due to peer pressures when they want to buy items that on trend, because they don’t want to be left out or stand out from a crowd. Moreover, uh, as, um, due impact, uh, due to the great impact of many celebrities on the social medias and many young people want to imitate their styles.

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a good overview of the reasons why young people want to replace their wardrobes. However, the answer could be more specific and provide more concrete examples. For example, the student could mention specific types of clothing or accessories that young people often replace.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-organized and easy to follow. The student uses appropriate cohesive devices, such as 'so,' 'this is due to,' and 'moreover.' However, there are a few instances of hesitation and repetition, such as 'uh' and 'due to.' The student could improve their fluency by practicing speaking more spontaneously and confidently.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, including 'fashion conscious,' 'update,' 'wardrobe,' 'peer pressure,' 'trendy,' and 'imitate.' However, there are a few instances of less precise vocabulary, such as 'on trend' and 'stand out from a crowd.' The student could improve their lexical resource by using more sophisticated and precise vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates good grammatical accuracy, with only a few minor errors. For example, the student uses 'due to' twice in a row, which is grammatically incorrect. The student could improve their grammatical range and accuracy by practicing using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and conditional clauses.

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