Band 6+: What goals do people at your age have?

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a general response. However, it could be improved by elaborating on the career and family life aspects and providing more specific examples of goals. Consider exploring different types of career goals or family life aspirations to demonstrate a wider range of understanding. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is understandable and coherent. However, the phrasing 'It has individual personal preferences that what age they have different goals' is slightly awkward and could be improved for greater fluency. Consider restructuring this sentence for better flow. A more concise and natural way to express this would be to directly state that people have different goals at different ages.

The vocabulary used is adequate and appropriate for the topic. While the answer uses simple vocabulary, it effectively conveys the message. Using more sophisticated vocabulary to describe career aspirations or family life would enhance the response.

There are some grammatical inaccuracies. The sentence 'It has individual personal preferences that what age they have different goals' is grammatically incorrect. The student should focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. While the main idea is clear, more precise grammar would significantly improve the score.