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Band 7+: What goals do people at your age have?

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I think that many people my age have financial goals as they are young and want to have lucrative businesses. They tend to set goals related to achieving a lot of money in the future. Some of them are experts and have experience in many fields, while others are low-skilled. So they have to try hard. But I think both groups have financial goals.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I think that many people in my age have financial goals as they are youngsters and they want to have lucrative businesses. So they tend to have set goals among or through achieving a lot of money in the future. Some of them are expertise and have many… and they have exercised in many fields, but some of them are low-skilled persons. So they have to try hard. But I think both of them have financial goals.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

have: 5

goals: 3

they: 3

think: 2

financial: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

7.5

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is quite good and addresses the question directly. Consider expanding on the diversity of goals beyond financial ones. Adding examples of non-financial goals, such as career progression, personal development, or family-related goals, would enrich the response and demonstrate a broader understanding of the topic.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There's a slight stumble in the middle ('many...and they have exercised in many fields'), but it doesn't significantly detract from the overall flow. Minor improvements in phrasing would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'lucrative' and 'expertise' show a good range. However, more precise language could be used in places. For example, instead of 'exercised in many fields,' a more specific phrase would be better. Consider synonyms for 'lucrative' to demonstrate a wider vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies. The sentence structure is sometimes awkward ('So they tend to have set goals among or through achieving a lot of money in the future'). The phrasing needs improvement for better grammatical accuracy. While the main ideas are understandable, more precise grammatical structures would improve the score.

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