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Band 7+: What habits should children have?

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Honestly, in my point of view, there are two crucial habits that children should have. One is taking responsibility for their actions and words, and the other is punctuality. For instance, if a child says that he is going to get up at 7 am tomorrow, he has to wake up early because this is how you build discipline.

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Honestly, in my point of view, there are two crucial habits which children should have. One is taking responsibilities for their actions and words and punctuality. For instance, if the child said that tomorrow he is going to get up at 7 am, he has to wake up early because that’s because this is how you build your discipline.

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The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant habits. Expanding on the reasons why these habits are important for children's development could further enhance the answer.

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The answer is generally coherent, but there are some minor stumbles. The structure is clear with an introduction of two habits. To improve, focus on smoother transitions between ideas and avoid unnecessary repetition. For example, the phrase 'that's because' could be streamlined.

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The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. The use of 'crucial habits' and 'taking responsibilities' is good. To enhance the lexical resource, try incorporating more varied and precise vocabulary related to habit formation and child development. For example, instead of 'taking responsibilities,' you could use 'cultivating a sense of accountability.'

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors. 'Taking responsibilities' should be 'taking responsibility.' Also, the sentence structure could be improved for clarity. For example, 'if the child said that tomorrow he is going to get up at 7 am, he has to wake up early' could be rephrased as 'if a child says he is going to get up at 7 am tomorrow, he has to wake up early.' Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures with greater accuracy.

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