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Band 5+: What important decisions do young people need to make after the completion of high school?

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Making decisions is one of the most important and crucial parts of our life and society. After graduating high school, people should analyze or decide whether they want to leave the state or whether they want a job. They should decide about this, and additionally, they should also decide on their life partner because they spend their whole life with this person and make a family with him or her. That's why choosing the right person in your life is one of the most important or crucial decisions in our life.

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Making decisions are one of the most important and the crucial part of our life and the society. After graduating high school, the people should analyze or decide whether they want to leave state or whether they want the job or not they should decide about this and additionally they should also decide their life partner because they spend their whole life with this person and make a family with him or her That’s why making a right person in your life is one of the most important or crucial decisions in our life.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

life: 5

they: 5

should: 3

decide: 3

decisions: 2

important: 2

crucial: 2

whether: 2

their: 2

person: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer addresses the question by mentioning decisions about leaving the state, getting a job, and choosing a life partner. However, it focuses too much on personal experience and lacks a general, well-developed discussion. The response could be improved by providing a broader range of typical decisions young people face, such as further education, career paths, or skill development, and by elaborating on each point with more detail and examples.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer has some coherence but lacks clear organization and logical progression. The student jumps from career decisions to life partner choices without smooth transitions. There is some repetition ('one of the most important and crucial') and the ending feels abrupt. To improve, use cohesive devices like 'firstly', 'secondly', or 'in addition' to structure ideas, and ensure each point is fully developed before moving to the next.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited and repetitive ('important', 'crucial', 'decide'). The phrase 'make a family' is slightly awkward; 'start a family' is more natural. The student attempts to use some higher-level words ('analyze', 'crucial') but lacks precision. To improve, expand vocabulary with terms like 'pursue higher education', 'enter the workforce', 'relocate', or 'choose a life partner', and avoid overusing the same words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors. 'Making decisions are' should be 'Making decisions is' (subject-verb agreement). 'Whether they want the job or not' is unclear and should be 'whether they want a job or not'. 'Decide their life partner' should be 'decide on their life partner'. The sentence 'That's why making a right person...' is awkward; 'choosing the right person' is better. The student uses simple structures with limited range. To improve, practice subject-verb agreement, use a mix of simple and complex sentences, and proofread for common errors.

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