Part 3

Band 6+: What important decisions do young people need to make after the completion of high school?

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

78% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

I would say some important decisions that young people need to make after the completion of high school. The first one is the place they want to live in and also the job they want to spend their whole life doing. Additionally, the life partner they want to spend their whole life with is important. They should also consider their mission, goals, and dreams for life. Furthermore, as I mentioned, the person with whom they want to start a family is a significant decision.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I would say some important decisions that young people should need to make after the completion of high school. The first one, the place they would want to live in and also the job they want the person want to spend their whole life maybe. And also the person, the person, the life partner, who the person wants to spend their whole life. And also the mission and the goals, dreams, what dreams they want to send for life. Additionally, I think the, as I said, the person which they want to make family.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 34 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 5

want: 4

life: 4

their: 3

important: 2

spend: 2

whole: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant points. To improve, consider elaborating on each decision with more detailed explanations and examples. Also, ensure a wider range of vocabulary and more complex sentence structures are used to enhance the overall quality of the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('the person, the person'). Using more varied cohesive devices would improve the flow. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use synonyms or rephrase your sentences for better coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and flexibility. The range of words used is limited. Try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to career choices, relationships, and personal goals. For example, instead of 'the job they want to spend their whole life,' you could say 'their career path' or 'their professional aspirations.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally understandable, but there are errors in sentence structure and word usage ('the job they want the person want to spend'). There are also issues with pronoun usage ('who the person wants to spend'). Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in subject-verb agreement and pronoun references. Practice constructing more complex sentences correctly.

Answers On The Same Topic:

What important decisions do young people need to make after the completion of high school?

When teenagers completing after high school, they should make a decision what they want. Whether studying abroad or some country or being their own employer actually. For example, when I completed high school, I immediately prepared to university to build a better future for me. Especially when this university would be in the foreign country, […]

Band 6+

See All

In what ways might globalization change the traditional family structures in your country?

How do I think globalization had affected traditional family structures in my country? I think yes, definitely it had an impact in our daily life, like in our family structures. Like we were wearing dresses or clothes, clothing in our daily life before the globalization come to our city, our… to us like before it […]

Band 6+

Why do people get up early?

To be honest it will depend on their personal preferences, however mostly people are willing to wake up at the crack of dawn. For instance it encourages them to complete their tasks from their daily routine beforehand. As a result, they are able to schedule their time effectively and focus on their time management. Moreover, […]

Band 8+

Do you think children are born smart or do they learn to become smart?

Well, I suppose that it depends on individual circumstances. When it comes to children who are born with cognitive potentials, they tend to show their intelligence at a very young age. For example, some may find languages easier, while others may be naturally drawn to numbers without any formal training. However, for people who are […]

Band 7+

To what extent do you think celebrity culture influences people's values and aspirations?

In my opinion, celebrity culture does significantly affect people’s values and aspirations. This is because they are not just people who live in the public eye, but they are role model for the use. So I have to say they have great influence on peoples.

Band 7+

Do you agree that there are still many more major technological innovations to be made?

Yes, there are many more technological innovations to be made. One of the biggest technologies invented in the 21st century is AI and robots. And there are other more advanced AI robots to be invented in the future. Currently, the only type of AI invented are agentic AI and generative AI. Tesla CEO Elon Mox […]

Band 6+

how much has technology improved how we communicate with each other?

Back in those days, it was difficult to communicate with our family and friends. People sent letters to one another as communication. 21st century is different. There are different means of communication like social media platforms like Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp and Facebook. There are other means of communication like email. It’s mainly used in professional […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium