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Band 6+: What important decisions do young people need to make after the completion of high school?

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When teenagers complete high school, they should make a decision about what they want. Whether studying abroad or in their own country, or becoming their own employer. For example, when I completed high school, I immediately prepared for university to build a better future for myself. Especially if this university is in a foreign country, it will be very beneficial because people should leave their comfort zone for improvement.

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When teenagers completing after high school, they should make a decision what they want. Whether studying abroad or some country or being their own employer actually. For example, when I completed high school, I immediately prepared to university to build a better future for me. Especially when this university would be in the foreign country, it will be very good because the people should leave their comfort zone for improvement.

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school: 2

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country: 2

university: 2

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some examples of decisions young people face after high school. However, it focuses too much on personal experience and doesn't explore the range of decisions in a general way. Consider broadening the scope to include other significant choices, such as career paths, further education options beyond university, and life choices unrelated to work or study.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor issues with phrasing, such as "When teenagers completing after high school" could be improved to "When teenagers complete high school." The ideas are presented logically, but smoother transitions between points would enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "employer" and "comfort zone" are used appropriately. More sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated to demonstrate a wider range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies, such as the sentence structure in the first sentence and the use of "being their own employer actually." While the overall message is clear, more attention to grammatical precision is needed. The use of conditional sentences could be improved for greater accuracy and sophistication.

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