Band 6+: What is the impact on society of people having a poor work life balance

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is relevant to the question and touches upon some societal impacts. However, it primarily focuses on the individual consequences of poor work-life balance. To achieve a higher score, expand on the societal effects, such as decreased economic productivity, increased healthcare costs, or the impact on family structures and social well-being. Consider providing more specific examples and exploring the broader societal implications.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor issues with the flow of ideas, particularly in the second sentence. The conclusion is a bit abrupt. Try to expand on solutions or further consequences.

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. The term "employee-cell estims" is incorrect and needs replacing with a more appropriate term like "self-esteem." A wider range of vocabulary would enhance the response.

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors. The phrase "pupils who can balance their work and life" is grammatically incorrect and should be revised. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score.