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Band 4+: What is the impact on society of people having a poor work life balance

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I think in society, people face either a poor life or a rich life. Those who have enough money can do anything and are living happily. In the case of poor people, they are more impacted by society, and their lives are much more difficult than those of rich people. They cannot do their work properly. While we often think that money equates to happiness, I believe poor people are much more impacted by society.

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I think in a society people face a poor life or a rich life but the people who have enough money they can do anything they are living happily. But in case of a poor the society poor people are more impacted on a society and their life is so most difficult than rich people. They cannot do their work properly. But in a society we thought money they cannot be happy so I think poor people are much more impacted on society.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 4

society: 3

poor: 3

more: 3

think: 2

those: 2

money: 2

impacted: 2

their: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it mainly focuses on the socioeconomic disparity and its impact, rather than directly addressing the effects of poor work-life balance on society. Consider structuring your response to directly address the question's prompt. Try to provide a more general discussion of the societal impact of poor work-life balance, rather than focusing on a specific socioeconomic group.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but the ideas are not well-organized. There is some repetition and rambling. The structure could be improved by focusing on the impact of poor work-life balance specifically, rather than contrasting rich and poor lives in general. More precise linking words would improve the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. Words like "impacted" are used repeatedly and less sophisticated alternatives could be used. More specific vocabulary related to work-life balance and societal impact would improve the score. The phrasing is sometimes awkward, for example, "in a society we thought money they cannot be happy."

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and inaccuracies. Sentence structures are often simple and lack complexity. The use of articles is inconsistent. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures would significantly improve the score. For example, the sentence 'But in a society we thought money they cannot be happy' is grammatically incorrect and unclear.

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