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Band 6+: What is the most important thing in friendship ?

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I would say there are a multitude of factors that affect a friendship, but in my opinion, at the top of them is trust between friends, which affects the most. I think we cannot be friends with someone who will betray us or stab us in the back by making fun of our bad behavior with others. Another factor I would mention is shared hobbies; I cannot imagine enduring a friendship without having any similar hobbies. So, yeah, that's why I think these are the two most important things in friendship.

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I would say there will be a multitude of factors that affect a friendship but in my opinion, on top of them is the just between friends which will affect the most because I think that we cannot make friends with someone who will betray us and stop us in our backs just by telling, by making fun of our bad behavior with other people and another factor I would say is the hobbies like I cannot imagine to endure a friendship without having any similar hobbies with each other so yeah that’s why I think these are the two most important things in friendship

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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would: 2

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cannot: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is well-organized and coherent. Consider exploring the chosen factors (trust and shared hobbies) with more detailed examples or explanations to further enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition and slightly hesitant phrasing ("I would say..."), but the ideas are presented in a logical order. Improving the flow by using more sophisticated linking words and phrases would enhance fluency. For example, instead of 'another factor I would say is...', try 'Furthermore...' or 'In addition...'

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The use of phrases like "stab us in the back" is effective and demonstrates a good range. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used. For example, instead of 'endure a friendship,' consider 'maintain a friendship' or 'sustain a friendship.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors. The sentence 'there will be a multitude of factors that affect a friendship but in my opinion, on top of them is the just between friends' is grammatically incorrect. The phrasing needs improvement. While the overall message is clear, more complex grammatical structures and precise word choices would improve the score.

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