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Band 6+: What job would you like to have 10 years from now and why

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Hello everyone, today I want to talk about my life in 10 years. Ten years from now, I want to become a skilled technical worker who is very good at fixing teeth. I hope to have a stable life where I can earn money to take care of my parents and have a small house of my own. I chose this career because I love working with my hands, and I feel happy when I am being technical. To become the person I want to be, I need to pass my junior exams, graduate with a good degree, and learn many practical skills.

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Hello everyone, today I want to talk about my life in the 10 years. 10 years from now, I want to become a skilled technical worker who is very good at fixing my teeth. I hope to have a stable life where I can earn money, not eat money to take care of my parents and have a small house of my own. I chose this soldier because I love working with my hands and I feel happy when I am self-technical. To become the person I need to pass my juniors exam with graduate with a good degree and learn many practical skills.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

want: 3

years: 2

become: 2

technical: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response is relevant and provides a clear picture of the desired job and the reasons behind it. The answer also includes the steps needed to achieve this goal, demonstrating a good level of detail and coherence. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific details about the type of technical work or the specific skills you aim to develop.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally coherent, but there are some minor stumbles and awkward phrasing. The structure is present but could be improved with clearer transitions between ideas. For example, the transition from aspirations to the steps needed to achieve them could be smoother. Try to use more varied cohesive devices to link your ideas together more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but it lacks precision and variety. The phrase "not eat money" is unclear and detracts from the overall clarity. Using more specific and nuanced vocabulary would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'fixing my teeth,' use 'dental repair' or 'dental procedures.' Also, 'self-technical' is not a common phrase; consider using 'technically proficient' or 'skilled in technical work.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, "I chose this soldier" should be "I chose this career." Also, "juniors exam with graduate" should be "junior exams and graduate." Focus on using correct verb tenses and prepositions to improve accuracy. Practice using a wider range of sentence structures to demonstrate grammatical range.

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