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Band 6+: What kind of job can be called a 'dream job'?

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Well, for this question, the most important reason for most Chinese people is income. For example, income is a vital reason for a dream job for most people in China. If Chinese people want to get married, they have to purchase a house and a car and even pay a lot of money to their girlfriend. On top of that, job security is also an important factor in a dream job for most people. In China, there are many occupations with high income, but people are unwilling to pursue them because of job security, as job security isn't...

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Well, for this question, the most important reason for most Chinese people, maybe income. For example, actually, income is a vital reason for dream job for most people in China. For example, if Chinese people want to get married with others, they have to purchase a horse and a car and even pay lots of money to his girlfriend or to their girlfriend. And on top of that, the safe is also an important factor of dream job for most people. Because actually, in China, there are lots of occupations have high income. But people are unwilling to do that because of safe, because the safe isn’t…

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income: 3

security: 3

important: 2

reason: 2

chinese: 2

dream: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question but could benefit from broader examples beyond financial aspects and job security. Consider exploring other elements that might constitute a 'dream job,' such as personal fulfillment, work-life balance, or opportunities for creativity and innovation. Additionally, try to avoid over-generalizations about specific nationalities.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('For example, actually,' 'safe, because the safe isn't...'). The organization of ideas is present but could be smoother. To improve, try to minimize filler words and practice speaking more continuously on a topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly varied or precise. The phrase 'purchase a horse and a car' is inaccurate and should be 'purchase a house and a car'. To enhance lexical resource, focus on using more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to work and career aspirations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and there are some accuracy issues. For example, 'the safe is also an important factor' is grammatically awkward and should be 'job security is also an important factor'. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in basic sentence construction.

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