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Band 7+: What kind of job can be called a 'dream job'?

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Personally, I think that there is no certain concept of a dream job. It depends on the needs of the person. For example, some people who dream of becoming rich or billionaires will think that a business mogul will be their dream job because it is very flexible and can earn a lot of money through sales. However, some people also think that if they are dreaming, they want to be a teacher or a doctor. They can find success and develop themselves as individuals. So, I think that there is no certain concept of a dream job. It will depend on the person.

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Personally, I think that there is not any certain concept about a dream job. It will depend on the needs of person. For example, some people who dream to become rich or billionaires will think that a business month will be their dream job because it is very free and can earn a lot of money by they sell. However, some people also think that they vote for a If they are dream, they want to be a teacher or a doctor, we can have their success become more developed and have a person by their own. So I think that there’s not any certain concept of a dream job. It will depend on person.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

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dream: 4

will: 3

they: 3

there: 2

certain: 2

concept: 2

person: 2

people: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant examples to support the points. The answer could be enhanced by exploring the characteristics that generally make a job desirable, such as work-life balance, job satisfaction, or opportunities for growth, in addition to financial aspects.

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Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and sophistication. The phrase 'business mogul' is well-used. Aim to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively. For example, instead of 'earn a lot of money,' you could say 'generate substantial revenue' or 'accrue significant profits.'

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors that occasionally impede understanding. For example, 'there is not any certain concept' should be 'there is no certain concept.' Also, the sentence 'They can have their success become more developed and have a person by their own' is grammatically awkward and unclear. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures with greater accuracy. Review basic grammar rules and practice constructing complex sentences correctly.

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