Part 3

Band 5+: what kinds of computer games do people play in your country

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

45% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

There are numerous types of computer games that people play in my country, including PUBG, Sub-Reserve, Bubble Trouble, and PUBG, which is the most famous game in the world. It is played more than any other game. Everyone enjoys playing it, and especially young people are spending a lot of time on this game. They often neglect their studies, which affects their grades.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

There are numerous types of computer games that I play in my country. Including PUBG, Sub-Reserve, PUBG, Bubble Trouble, and PUBG, which is the most famous game in the world. It is played among all the games. Everyone is enjoying to play with it. And especially Young Perf, they are wasting their time on this game. And the air is bad and many hours on this game I’m doing. Don’t focus on their studies, which act on their grades.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 25 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

game: 3

people: 2

which: 2

their: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is below average and may be understood with some effort. Pay attention to common phonemes that are challenging for you.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some examples of popular games. However, it focuses too much on one specific game (PUBG) and includes an opinion about its negative effects, which is not directly asked for in the question. Try to maintain a more general and balanced overview of different game types and avoid expressing personal opinions or focusing on a single example excessively.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat repetitive, mentioning PUBG three times. While the main ideas are presented in a logical order, smoother transitions and less repetition would improve fluency. The ending about negative effects on studies is abrupt.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "numerous" and "neglect" show a good range, but more precise and varied vocabulary would elevate the response. The phrase "Young Perf" is unclear and needs correction.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors. The sentence structure is often simple. While the meaning is generally clear, more complex sentence structures and accurate grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles) are needed for a higher score. The phrase "It is played among all the games" is grammatically incorrect.

Answers On The Same Topic:

what kinds of computer games do people play in your country

Nowadays there are several computer games that are very popular among teenagers, for example Call of Duty or FIFA, that offer them the possibility not only to play but also to talk with other players.

Band 7+

what kinds of computer games do people play in your country

In my country, in Russia, people, especially teenagers, kids, a lot of their time, a lot of their time playing video games. It is some cultural feature, especially because video games are a prevalent topic of discussion in social media, television, and other media.

Band 6+

what kinds of computer games do people play in your country

In my country, people doing many kind of game, most of all my country people playing is the favorite football and cricket. I love to play cricket in football. When I get a free time, I will do and I was a child, I will try, I was a try in playing the cricket and […]

Band 5+

what kinds of computer games do people play in your country

In Vietnam, all types of games are published in my countries and as I could say, computer games is a wise peer of my countries. Most of people enjoy of them. For example, some people have a young age, but that’s not about my country. It’s just my country. I’m not a fan of computer […]

Band 5+

See All

What role do you believe art and creativity play in fostering community and social connection?

Art and music are the most vital things which our tradition shows that for what we belong to and what are the cultural activities we have in our nation and I think if anybody or any individual just want to learn about anybody’s culture they just need to look for their musical thing and mostly […]

Band 6+

How can educational systems better prepare students for the rapidly evolving job market?

Education system adapts to better prepares for the path way from job market. According to my opinion, whenever people get very well education over taking easily well job and well standard who not be going to face difficulties. This happened to conclude early field now that there are very having activity, nothing is better than […]

Band 4+

In what ways might the global push for sustainability impact the future of international trade?

I’d like to believe that it has a positive impact for the future because sustainability is very important, especially if it’s internationally. A country could have eco-friendly, culture-free friendly products that do not harm the earth and one country might not really care about this stuff. So I believe that between international trade, one country […]

Band 7+

In what ways might space exploration benefit society beyond scientific advancements?

I believe space exploration could benefit society on earth in a positive way because sadly our earth is getting harmed every single day with global warming, air pollution, noise pollution and more. So I believe that if we go through space and we really put our time and mind into space exploration, we could maybe […]

Band 7+

Is it better to encourage people with rewards or with words?

Well, that’s an interesting question. I believe that it depends on the situation. For example, some people prefer taking monetary rewards while others prefer taking verbal oppression. I believe that both of them play a crucial role. And on the other hand, monetary rewards provide short-term consequences and adventures. In contrast, verbal oppression offers long-term […]

Band 6+

Many animals are becoming extinct. Why is this happening?

Unfortunately, it is true that many animals are becoming extinct. I’m not sure why is it happening but I think one of the biggest reasons is the environment. The environment has polluted because of the bad things like the air pollution, the water pollution and many things and I think this is one of the […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium