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Band 6+: What kinds of promises do people often make?

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Mature people tend to keep promises when hanging out with their coworkers or loved ones, even if they don't realize how busy they are. At the end of this process, distrust can develop among them. Another promise could be accepting a wedding invitation but not keeping it, resulting in not attending the wedding or something similar. However, I believe that if people keep their promises, their interpersonal relationships would be at a better level, and this process can enhance their future network.

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Mature people can tend to keep a promise with hanging out their coworkers or their beloved people, despite don’t realize that how they are busy. At the end of this process, the distrust can happen between among them. Another promises could be accept a wedding invitation, but don’t keep these promises at the end of this day and didn’t came to the wedding or something like that. But I believe that if the people keep their promising, their interpersonal relationship would be in better level and this process can enhance their future network actually.

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promises: 2

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The answer is relevant to the question and provides a couple of examples of broken promises. However, it could benefit from exploring a wider range of promise types and providing more specific examples. Consider discussing promises related to work, personal goals, or social commitments for a more comprehensive response.

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