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Band 7+: What kinds of things do young people like to replace?

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In my country and in the world, younger individuals tend to replace their phones with newer versions because they love showing off their items, especially their smartphones. On the other hand, a small portion of young individuals prefer to replace their computers because they are still old and they are hardcore gamers. They love gaming and spend at least 12 or 13 hours a day playing video games.

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In my country and in the world, younger individuals tend to replace their phones with the newer versions, because they love showing off with their items, especially with their smartphones. On the other hand, a small portion of young individuals prefer to replace their computers, because it’s still old and they are hard gamers. I mean, they love gaming and they spend at least 12 or 13 hours a day to play video games.

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some examples of what young people like to replace. However, it could be improved by providing a wider range of examples and exploring the reasons behind these replacements in more detail. Consider discussing other items besides phones and computers, and exploring motivations beyond showing off or gaming.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-organized and coherent. The speaker uses cohesive devices effectively ('on the other hand'). Fluency is good, with only minor hesitations. Minor improvements could be made by slightly smoothing out the transition between the two points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "showing off" and "hardcore gamers" are well-chosen. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to enhance the response. For example, instead of 'showing off', the speaker could use 'flaunting' or 'displaying'. Instead of 'hardcore gamers', the speaker could use 'avid gamers' or 'dedicated gamers'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, with only a few minor errors. The sentence structure is varied, but some sentences could be more concise and grammatically refined. For example, the phrase 'because it's still old' could be improved to 'because they are outdated' or 'because they are obsolete'. The speaker uses a range of tenses appropriately.

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