Band 6+: What makes a city a good one to live in?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question but could benefit from further development and a broader range of factors. Expanding on the initial points and providing more specific examples would strengthen the answer.

The response starts with a slightly awkward phrase, 'Okay, we discussed about...' which could be more natural. There are some hesitations ('Okay, as to me') and repetitions ('there is a lot of'). To improve, try to minimize filler words and organize your thoughts more clearly before speaking. Using cohesive devices like 'furthermore' or 'in addition' can also enhance coherence.

The vocabulary is relatively simple ('a lot of factor,' 'facilities and amenities'). While understandable, it lacks precision and sophistication. To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to urban living and quality of life. For example, instead of 'a lot of factor,' you could say 'numerous key aspects' or 'a multitude of considerations.'

There are grammatical errors such as 'we discussed about' (should be 'we discussed') and 'is one of the most important obligate' (should be 'is one of the most important obligations' or 'is obligatory'). The sentence structure is also quite basic. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in verb tenses, prepositions, and noun forms.