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Band 6+: what makes a good doctor

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Me personally, I think that to be a good doctor, you have to be ethically good and also be good at your academics so that you can help people properly. Without these factors, you cannot be a good doctor. Because if you don't have ethics, that means you can be wrong in saving someone's life. So if you want to be a good doctor, you have to manage the risks that will happen to the person you will save. And you have to be patient and good so that many people will respect you as a good doctor.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

good: 7

that: 5

doctor: 4

have: 4

will: 3

people: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it focuses more on personal opinions and experiences rather than providing a general overview of what constitutes a good doctor. Consider broadening your response to include a wider range of qualities and skills, such as communication, empathy, and problem-solving abilities, and avoid using phrases like "Me personally". Try to structure your response more logically and provide more specific examples to support your points.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ("you you", "that that"). Smoother delivery and reduced self-correction would improve fluency. The structure is logical, progressing from ethical considerations to practical skills and patient interaction.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "ethically good" could be replaced with more precise terms like "possessing strong moral principles." Expanding vocabulary with more nuanced medical terms would enhance the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are present ("altic", "riskits"). While the overall message is clear, more accurate grammar is needed. Improving sentence structure and tense consistency would significantly improve the score. Consider using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider grammatical range.

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