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Band 7+: What role should businesses play in addressing social inequality?

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There are many things that businesses can do. First of all, they can adopt social equality practices. For example, when hiring employees, they should choose men and women equally. On top of that, they could create an inclusive workplace environment. This will make employees feel more respected. In addition, businesses can promote social equality through their products and marketing campaigns, which help increase social awareness in society.

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There are so many things that businesses can do. First of all, they can adopt social equality practices. For example, when they hire employees, they should choose men and women equally. On top of that, they could create inclusive workplace environment. This will make the employees more respected. In addition, businesses can promote social equality through their products and marketing campaigns which help increase social awareness in society.

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social: 3

businesses: 2

equality: 2

employees: 2

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