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Band 7+: What role should businesses play in addressing social inequality?

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Actually, that's quite an interesting question because I've never thought about it before, and it really does make me think. I believe that corporations should play a role in addressing social inequalities because corporations nowadays are becoming increasingly prominent, and as they take on that big role in society, I think they should contribute to addressing social inequalities.

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Um, actually that’s a quite interesting question because I’ve never thought about it before and it really does make me think. So actually I do believe that corporations should play a role in addressing social inequalities because corporations nowadays are becoming increasingly popular and as they take up that big role in society, I think they should contribute to addressing social inequalities.

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corporations: 2

should: 2

addressing: 2

social: 2

inequalities: 2

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