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Band 7+: What should celebrities do to protect their privacy?

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There are various ways for famous people to protect their privacy. First of all, they can hire a reliable bodyguard to help them avoid paparazzi or obsessive fans when they are working. On top of that, I think they need to lock their social media accounts to avoid leaking pictures or personal information on the Internet. Additionally, they can invest in secure accommodations with many layers of security that can help them have a safe life.

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There are various ways for the famous people to protect their privacy. First of all, they can hire a reliable bodyguard to help them avoid some paparazzi or obsessive fans when they are working. Um, on top of that, they can. I think they need to lock their, uh, social media accounts to avoid, uh, leading picture or some personal information on the Internet. On top of that, they can invest a, uh, secure accommodation, um, with many layers of securities that can help them have a. The saf for life.

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Task Response

The answer is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the question with relevant and specific suggestions. Consider exploring additional strategies, such as legal action against privacy violations or carefully managing public appearances and media interactions.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-organized. The use of 'First of all,' 'On top of that,' and 'Additionally' shows good organization. However, there are some noticeable hesitations ('um', 'uh') that slightly detract from the fluency. Reducing these fillers would improve the score.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'reliable bodyguard,' 'obsessive fans,' 'leaking pictures,' and 'secure accommodations' demonstrate a good range. However, using more precise language, such as 'compromising photos' instead of 'leaking pictures,' would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly correct, but there are a few minor errors. For example, 'The saf for life' is grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure is generally simple. Using more complex sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy in every sentence would improve the score.

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