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Band 7+: What was the dream job when you were young?

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When I was a kid, all I wanted was to be a cashier because I was fascinated by a cash drawer that had a lot of money. But then, I realized that the money in that drawer was for customers. Thinking about it now still entertains me.

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When I was a kid, all I wanted was to be a cashier because I was fascinated by a drawer forecast that had a lot of money. But then, I know that the money in that machine was for Castro. Thinking about is now ready to entertain me.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

that: 3

drawer: 2

money: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response is relevant and provides a clear answer to the question. The answer is well-structured and easy to follow. To further enhance the response, consider adding more descriptive details or expanding on the reasons behind your childhood dream.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally fluent and coherent. The response is easy to follow, but there is room for improvement in using cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. For example, you could add a phrase like 'Looking back' to better introduce the concluding thought.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Using 'cash drawer' instead of 'drawer forecast' would be more accurate. Also, consider using synonyms to enhance your response. For example, instead of saying 'entertains me,' you could say 'amuses me' or 'intrigues me'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate. The sentence structure is good. However, there's a slight error with the word 'Castro,' which should be 'customers' to make sense in the context. Ensure that your word choice is accurate to avoid confusion.

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