Band 5+: What was your dream when you were a child

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is relevant to the question. However, it lacks detail and depth. Consider elaborating on specific aspects of police work that interested you, or providing more context about your father's influence. Adding a personal anecdote could make the response more engaging and natural.

The answer is understandable, but there are some noticeable repetitions and self-corrections. The structure could be improved by using clearer transitions between ideas. For example, instead of 'Moreover, my dad became a policy,' a more natural phrasing would be 'My father's career as a police officer also influenced me.'

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The repeated use of 'very' weakens the description. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to describe the job, such as 'challenging,' 'rewarding,' or 'essential.'

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'I became a childhood,' which should be 'In my childhood,' or 'I became interested in...'. The sentence structure is also quite simple and repetitive. More complex sentence structures and accurate verb tenses would improve the score.