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Band 6+: Who do you think should set goals for children?

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Okay, well, in my personal opinion, parents should always set goals for their children because a large number of parents really worry about their children's lives. Therefore, most parents try hard to work for a good life for their children. Additionally, parents always think about their children's lives as they grow. They want to provide expensive things for their children and purchase everything their children want and so on. Therefore, I assume that parents set their goals for their children.

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Okay, well, um, in my personal opinion, parents always set their goal for their children, um, because a large number of parents really worry about their children’s life. And therefore, um, most of the parents, uh, tryied to hard work, uh, for good life for their children. Um, and additionally, parents always think about their children’s, um, life as they said. And they want to poase, uh, ext. Pensive things, thanks for their children. And, um, purchase everything their children want and so on. Therefore, I assume that, um, parents set their calls for their children.

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their: 8

parents: 5

children: 5

always: 2

goals: 2

about: 2

children's: 2

lives: 2

therefore: 2

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Task Response

The answer is understandable and addresses the question. However, it primarily focuses on parents' perspectives and motivations, lacking a broader discussion of other potential stakeholders like educators, mentors, or even the children themselves in goal-setting. Consider exploring diverse viewpoints and providing a more balanced perspective in future responses.

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The answer is coherent, but the fluency is hampered by numerous fillers ("um," "uh") and a slight hesitation towards the end. Practice speaking more smoothly and confidently, reducing filler words. Consider pausing briefly to gather your thoughts instead of using fillers.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the message is clear, using more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'tryied to hard work,' consider 'strive to provide' or 'work diligently to ensure'. The word 'poase' seems to be a misspelling; ensure accurate spelling and word choice.

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There are several grammatical errors, including tense inconsistencies ("tryied") and incorrect word order. While the overall meaning is understandable, improving grammatical accuracy is crucial. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage. Review sentence structures to ensure clarity and precision.

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