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Band 6+: Who do you think should set goals for children?

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I think actually this is their parents because parents can set up three main goals for them since parents are closest to them. Parents can understand their children's characteristics and abilities. Secondly, parents gain a lot of knowledge and experience in their lives, so they can guide and direct their children to achieve their goals effectively.

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I think actually this is their appearance because their appearance can set up for three eight goals for them because their appearance are close to them the most. Their appearance can understand their trans characteristic and abilities so secondly, parents gain lots of knowledge and experience in their life before so they can have their children guide and direct them to achieve their goals effectively.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 5

parents: 5

goals: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is quite good and addresses the question directly. Consider expanding on the types of goals parents might set, and perhaps briefly mentioning other influences on children's goal setting, such as teachers or mentors, to show a broader understanding of the topic.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. There's some repetition and slightly unclear phrasing. Improving the linking words and sentence structure would enhance fluency and coherence. Consider rephrasing "their appearance" to clarify the intended meaning, which seems to be "parents".

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "appearance" are used inappropriately. Using more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of 'appearance,' use 'parents' or 'guardians'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are grammatical errors, particularly in the first sentence and the use of "their appearance." The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Focusing on accurate grammar and sentence construction is crucial. Review subject-verb agreement and appropriate pronoun usage.

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