Part 3

Band 6+: Who is the most important person in your life? Who is your hero nowadays?

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My father is the most important person in my life because he always helped me. Even when I was a child and now that I am 20, he always supports me. Sometimes when I graduated and studied at university, he helped me by sending me money. And yeah, that's all.

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My father is the most important in my life because he always helped me. Even when I was a child and even when I am 20, he always supports me. Sometimes when I graduated when I studied at university, he helped me and he sent me the money. And yeah, that’s all.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

always: 2

helped: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response is somewhat relevant but lacks depth and sufficient detail. To improve, provide more specific reasons and examples to support your claims. Expand on the qualities that make your father important to you and consider discussing the concept of a 'hero' in a broader context.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is relatively coherent, but there are some pauses and hesitations that affect the flow. Using cohesive devices more effectively could improve the structure. For example, instead of saying 'And yeah, that's all,' try summarizing the main points about your father's importance in a more conclusive way.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is simple and adequate for the task, but lacks sophistication. To improve, try using more varied and descriptive words to explain why your father is important. For example, instead of just saying 'he helped me,' elaborate on the specific ways he helped you and the impact it had.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors, such as the phrasing 'when I graduated when I studied at university.' This could be improved by saying 'when I was studying at university' or 'during my university studies.' Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures to express your ideas more precisely.

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