Band 6+: Why are some students popular in school?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant reasons for student popularity. To improve, consider expanding on each point with more detailed explanations or examples. Varying sentence structures and vocabulary could also enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow. The use of 'So' to connect the ideas is appropriate. To improve, try to expand on the reasons with more specific examples or explanations. Vary sentence structure to enhance coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate and relevant to the topic. The phrase 'make other views comfortable' is slightly awkward; consider rephrasing it to 'make others feel comfortable' or 'make others feel at ease'. To enhance lexical resource, incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary related to social dynamics and popularity.

The grammar is mostly accurate. The sentence 'make other views comfortable' should be 'make others feel comfortable'. Overall, the grammatical range is good, but ensure consistent accuracy to achieve a higher score. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions.