Band 6+: Why did you choose this kind of work/to study this subject?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

This response is satisfactory, but it could be improved by elaborating on the reasons behind the choice of subjects. Mentioning personal interests or specific aspects of medicine that appeal to you would strengthen the answer. Also, focusing less on parental expectations and more on your own aspirations would make the response more compelling.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's a slight lack of fluency with the phrase 'due to my parents they want me to be a doctor,' which is grammatically incorrect and disrupts the flow. Combining the two sentences about parental influence would improve coherence. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to connect your ideas.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the words used are correct, there's a lack of range. Try to incorporate more precise and nuanced vocabulary to describe your motivations and aspirations. For example, instead of 'important,' you could use 'essential' or 'crucial.'

There are grammatical errors, most notably 'So I choose' (should be 'I chose') and the aforementioned problematic phrase 'due to my parents they want me to be a doctor.' The sentence structure is simple. Work on more complex sentence structures and ensure subject-verb agreement. Review grammar rules related to dependent clauses and conjunctions.