Band 6+: Why did you choose to do that type of work

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is understandable but lacks depth and specifics. Consider providing concrete examples to illustrate your points about customer relationships and the interesting aspects of the business world. Elaborating on the profit generation and the types of interactions would strengthen your response.

The answer is understandable but lacks a clear structure. The connection between favoring customers and the interesting aspects of the business world isn't fully developed. Try to create a more logical flow of ideas, perhaps by explicitly stating the reasons why you chose this type of work, rather than focusing on the benefits.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Phrases like "gain profits" and "lot of things" are somewhat vague. Using more specific and sophisticated vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of "gain profits," you could say "generate revenue" or "increase profitability." Instead of "lot of things," you could describe the specific benefits, such as networking opportunities or professional development.

There are some grammatical errors, such as "customer relationship is always became." The tense is inconsistent. The sentence structure is also somewhat simple. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more complex sentence structures would significantly enhance the score. Consider using a variety of tenses and sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical skills.