Band 7+: Why did you choose to do that type of work

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

The answer is quite good, directly answering the question and providing relevant reasons. To improve, consider elaborating on the types of interactions you enjoy and how the salary contributes to your personal or professional goals. Adding specific examples would strengthen your response.

The answer is coherent and well-structured. Minor repetition ('this job provides me that opportunity') could be avoided for improved fluency. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the flow, such as 'Furthermore,' or 'Moreover'.

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. 'Salary package' is acceptable but slightly informal; consider using 'salary' or 'compensation' for a more formal tone. The phrase 'various kind of people' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'various kinds of people'.

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are minor errors. The phrase 'various kind of people' is grammatically incorrect. The sentence 'it gives me good salary package also which is another significant in my decision' is slightly awkward and could be improved by rephrasing. Using more complex sentence structures would improve the score.