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Band 7+: Why do many people equate youth with beauty?

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In my opinion, a lot of people think that beauty and youth have a connection. It is mainly because of our society. As you can see from TV shows, YouTube, and movies, there are many young, beautiful models and actors. Mostly nice people play good characters in films, while older people can be portrayed as enemies and antagonists. So unfortunately, older people seem to be ugly and not as beautiful and wonderful as young people and teenagers. But maybe we can change this by changing the world.

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In my opinion, a lot of people think that beauty and youth have connection. It is mainly because of our society. As you can see from TV shows, from YouTube, from movies, there are a lot of young, beautiful models and actors. And mostly nice people who play good characters in films and old people can be enemies and antagonists. so unfortunately old people seemed to be ugly and not as beautiful and wonderful as young people and teenagers but maybe we can change it by by changing the world

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 5

young: 2

beautiful: 2

older: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear explanation for the perceived connection between youth and beauty. The answer is well-organized and supported with relevant examples. To further enhance the response, consider exploring the topic in more depth by discussing cultural or historical factors that contribute to this association. Additionally, providing a more nuanced perspective on the portrayal of older individuals in media could strengthen the argument.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and a repetition ('by by') that slightly affect the flow. To improve, try to minimize pauses and repetitions by practicing speaking on similar topics.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Using synonyms and more descriptive words would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'nice people,' you could use 'benevolent characters.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors (e.g., 'beauty and youth have connection' should be 'have a connection'). Focus on using articles correctly and varying sentence structures to demonstrate a wider grammatical range.

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