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Band 6+: why do people enjoy playing computer games?

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I believe that most people enjoy playing computer games because they are highly entertaining. Modern games are addictive. Besides, some people play games on their mobile phones and computers to kill time or just out of boredom.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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people: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some reasons why people enjoy computer games. However, it could be improved by elaborating on the reasons and providing more specific examples. Consider exploring different motivations, such as social interaction, competition, or the sense of accomplishment. A more detailed and nuanced response would strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and slight grammatical issues do not significantly detract from the overall clarity. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to improve the flow, such as 'Furthermore,' or 'In addition to this,' instead of 'Besides'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated. Words like "addictive" are a bit simplistic. Try using more nuanced vocabulary to describe the engaging nature of games, such as 'immersive,' 'challenging,' or 'rewarding.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The phrase 'one just out of board' is grammatically incorrect. Improving grammatical accuracy and range will enhance the overall score. Consider using more complex sentence structures.

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