Band 6+: Why do people like expensive watches

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question, but lacks depth and detail. Consider exploring the reasons behind the desire to 'look good' or 'show off their position'. Expanding on the social and cultural aspects of watch ownership would strengthen the response.

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. There's some hesitation and repetition ("some of them"). Try to plan your response briefly before speaking to improve coherence and reduce filler words.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Instead of "accessorize themselves to look good," consider more sophisticated phrasing like "enhance their appearance" or "complement their style." The phrase "show off their position" is acceptable but could be replaced with something more nuanced, like "display their status" or "project an image of success."

Grammatical errors are present. The sentence structure is somewhat awkward. The phrase "those expense watch are simply because" is grammatically incorrect. Work on sentence construction and subject-verb agreement. Consider using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical accuracy.