Part 3

Band 7+: Why do some people continue to be famous for a long time?

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Even though everyone can become a celebrity these days via the internet or social media, only a few people remain stable as celebrities in every field, such as sports and cinema. It's not only because of their special talent but also their hard work and maintenance, such as exercising to maintain their body structure and training. Involving themselves and dedicating time to that particular activity keeps them as celebrities.

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Even everyone can become a celebrity these days via internet or social media. Just few people only stable as a celebrity in every field such as sports and cinema. It’s not only because of their special talent but also their hard work and maintenance such as exercises for maintaining their body structures and trainings. Taking involving themselves and times in that particular activity is keeping them as a celebrity still.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

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celebrities: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is quite good and addresses the question directly. Consider expanding on the concept of 'maintenance' by providing specific examples of how celebrities sustain their fame beyond physical attributes. Exploring the role of public relations, consistent output of work, and adapting to changing trends would further strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There are a few minor issues with phrasing, such as "Even everyone can become a celebrity." Rephrasing to "Although anyone can become a celebrity..." would improve fluency and grammatical accuracy. Minor repetition of 'celebrity' could be reduced by using synonyms.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "stable" and "maintenance" are used appropriately, but more sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated to demonstrate a wider range. For example, instead of 'maintenance,' consider 'self-discipline' or 'dedication'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies, such as the sentence beginning with "Even everyone." The sentence structure is sometimes a bit awkward. Improving sentence structure and correcting minor grammatical errors will significantly improve the score. Consider using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical accuracy.

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