Band 6+: Why do some people feel they need to own thing?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some reasons why people want to own things. However, it could be improved by providing more specific examples and exploring a wider range of reasons. Consider exploring the psychological and social aspects of ownership in more depth.

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. The phrase "From my bubble state" is unclear and could be replaced with a more natural expression. The connection between wanting to persist and owning things isn't explicitly made. Improving the linking words and refining the overall structure would enhance fluency and coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "persist" and "stuff" are simple and could be replaced with more precise and nuanced vocabulary. Using more specific examples would enrich the lexical resource.

There are grammatical errors, such as "it's naturally for people to want to persist in." The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure would significantly improve the score. Consider using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical abilities.