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Band 5+: Why do some people find the internet addictive?

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To be honest, many people all over the world in this age of technology like to use the internet for various purposes. If they can't manage their time, I think they will become addicted to the internet. Consumers can manage and assess their time, but if they can't, they face some problems. I think they waste their time, and after that, they become addicted to the internet. For this reason, I think for better time management, there should be no more time spent on the internet to avoid becoming addicted.

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To be honest, many people all over the world in age of technology like to use internet for a revoke because there are some purpose for using internet. If they couldn’t manage their time, I think they will become addictive to internet and consumers can manage and assess their time. If they couldn’t manage their time, they faced some problems and I think they waste their time and after that they become addictive to internet. For this reason, I think for better time, no more time to internet, no more addictive to internet.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 6

time: 5

internet: 4

their: 3

think: 3

addicted: 3

can't: 2

manage: 2

become: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is understandable and touches upon the main aspects of internet addiction. However, it could benefit from a more in-depth exploration of the reasons behind addiction, going beyond simple time management. Consider exploring the psychological and social factors that contribute to internet addiction for a more comprehensive response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There is some repetition and self-correction. The ideas are presented in a somewhat disorganized manner. Improving the flow of ideas and reducing repetition would significantly enhance fluency. Consider using more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "revoke" are misused. The answer would benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary. Try to use more specific words to describe the reasons for internet addiction. For example, instead of 'various purposes,' you could mention specific activities like social media, gaming, or online shopping.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains several errors, including incorrect word order and tense inconsistencies. While the message is generally clear, grammatical accuracy needs improvement. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences, to demonstrate greater grammatical control.

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