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Band 6+: Why do some people find the internet addictive?

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To be honest, many people all over the world use the internet for various reasons in the age of technology. For example, some students use the platform for searching and improving their knowledge, while others use it for work and advertising. For this reason, many people rely on the internet for all their tasks. During this time, they may waste their time. I think the internet is not only affordable but also accessible and applicable. However, if they can't manage their time, they may become addicted to the internet, which is not good for anyone. It's better to manage their time effectively and use this platform for better education.

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To be honest, many people all over the world use internet for many reasons in the age of technology. And for example, some students use the platform for searching and improving their knowledge. And some people use this platform for working and advertising. For this reason, many people use the internet for every work. And in this time, maybe they waste their time. And I think the internet is not only affordable, but also accessible and applicable. But if they couldn’t manage their time, they will become addicted to the internet. And it’s not good for everyone. And it’s better to manage and access their time. And they use this platform for better education.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 5

internet: 4

time: 4

this: 3

they: 3

people: 2

platform: 2

manage: 2

better: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some reasons why people might find the internet addictive. However, it could be improved by focusing more directly on the addictive nature of the internet and providing more specific examples. Consider exploring the psychological aspects of internet addiction, such as the reward system and the escape it offers.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's some repetition and the ideas aren't always smoothly connected. Try to use more sophisticated linking words and phrases to improve the flow. For example, instead of simply listing reasons, you could use transitions like 'Furthermore,' 'Moreover,' or 'In addition to this.'

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision in places. Words like "platform" are used repeatedly and less sophisticated synonyms could be used. Try to use more specific and varied vocabulary to show a wider range. For example, instead of 'platform,' you could use 'online resources,' 'digital tools,' or 'the World Wide Web.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly correct, but there are some minor errors and inconsistencies. The sentence structure is sometimes simple and repetitive. Try to use more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or embedded clauses, to demonstrate a wider range. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

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