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Band 5+: why do some people get obsessed with their hobby

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In my opinion, every individual has different characteristics or personalities. Therefore, a person has a wide range of hobbies in their life, which they also engage in daily. When a person has a tendency to play basketball or soccer, sometimes they also create crafts or engage in cultural activities. For example, they might do card making for their children. It can vary. Every person enjoys their hobbies and loves them more than their work. They have a hilarious, enjoyable time, and in my opinion, every person shouldn't judge each other.

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In my opinion, every individual has different characters or personalities. Therefore, a person has a wide range of hobbies in their life. They also do that in their daily life. When a person has a tendency to play basketball or soccer, sometimes the person makes a craft or culture. Therefore, they do card making for their children. It can be different. Every person likes them and also loves them rather than they work. They have a hilarious, enjoyable and, in my opinion, every person don’t have a judge in each other.

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their: 4

they: 4

every: 3

opinion: 2

hobbies: 2

engage: 2

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Task Response

The answer is somewhat off-topic. It describes hobbies in general but doesn't address why some people become *obsessed* with them. Consider focusing on the reasons behind obsession, such as the sense of accomplishment, escape from stress, social connection, or personal fulfillment derived from a hobby. A more direct and analytical approach would improve the response.

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the speaker uses words like "characteristics" and "cultural activities," there's room for improvement in using more precise and nuanced vocabulary to express ideas about obsession and hobbies. Try to incorporate more specific examples and descriptive language.

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The grammar contains several errors, including incorrect word choices and sentence structures. For example, the phrase "every person don't have a judge in each other" is grammatically incorrect. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence construction. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and passive voice, to enhance the sophistication of your language.

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