Part 3

Band 4+: Why do some people prefer living in a multicultural society?

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I believe that it depends on their character and their nature. Even though some people prefer living in a multicultural city or country, other people choose their own cultural society. I also prefer our own culture and I like it, so overall it depends on people. They might be children of two cultures, parents, maybe their father is English and their mother is French. That's why they like multicultural society.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I believe that it depends on their character and their nature. Even though some people prefer living in a multicultural city or country, other people choose their own cultural society. I also prefer our culture, our own culture and I like it so overall it depends on people’s and they might be children of two cultures, parents, maybe their father is England and their mother is French. That’s why they like Mount Khao Tsong Sosariki.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 5

people: 3

depends: 2

prefer: 2

multicultural: 2

society: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer stays on topic but is somewhat repetitive and lacks depth. It mentions personal preference and gives an example of mixed heritage, but does not fully explore reasons why people prefer multicultural societies, such as diversity, learning opportunities, or open-mindedness. To improve, provide more general reasons and avoid personal opinions.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer has some organization but lacks clear progression. There is repetition ('our culture, our own culture') and an unclear ending ('Mount Khao Tsong Sosariki'). Use linking words to connect ideas more smoothly and avoid vague references.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is limited and repetitive ('culture', 'people'). There is an attempt to use specific terms ('multicultural society', 'children of two cultures') but errors like 'England' instead of 'English' and unclear phrases reduce precision. Expand vocabulary with synonyms and precise terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors include 'depends on people's' (incorrect possessive), 'their father is England' (should be 'English'), and the final phrase is garbled. Sentence structures are mostly simple. Work on subject-verb agreement and correct use of adjectives/nouns.

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